Revising the Advertising Poster
IntermediateBusiness
A marketing manager and a graphic designer discuss last-minute revisions to a new advertising poster in an open office before the campaign launches next month.
L
LinW
WangL
小王，海报的初稿我看了，整体感觉不错，不过有几个地方得改一下。
Xiǎo Wáng, hǎibào de chūgǎo wǒ kàn le, zhěngtǐ gǎnjué búcuò, búguò yǒu jǐ ge dìfang děi gǎi yíxià.
Xiao Wang, I've looked at the first draft of the poster. Overall it feels good, but there are a few places that need changing.
W
好的，林经理，您说，具体是哪些地方？
Hǎo de, Lín jīnglǐ, nín shuō, jùtǐ shì nǎxiē dìfang?
Sure, Manager Lin, go ahead. Which places specifically?
L
首先，标题的字太小了，客户希望产品名字更醒目一点。
Shǒuxiān, biāotí de zì tài xiǎo le, kèhù xīwàng chǎnpǐn míngzì gèng xǐngmù yìdiǎn.
First, the title text is too small. The client wants the product name to stand out more.
W
明白了，那我把标题放大，再换一种粗一点的字体，您看行吗？
Míngbái le, nà wǒ bǎ biāotí fàngdà, zài huàn yì zhǒng cū yìdiǎn de zìtǐ, nín kàn xíng ma?
Got it. Then I'll enlarge the title and switch to a bolder font. Does that work for you?
L
可以，另外背景颜色我觉得有点儿暗，是不是显得不够年轻？
Kěyǐ, lìngwài bèijǐng yánsè wǒ juéde yǒudiǎnr àn, shì bú shì xiǎnde búgòu niánqīng?
That works. Also, I feel the background color is a bit dark. Doesn't it look not youthful enough?
W
您说得对，我可以试试亮一点的蓝色，更符合这次的目标人群。
Nín shuō de duì, wǒ kěyǐ shìshi liàng yìdiǎn de lánsè, gèng fúhé zhè cì de mùbiāo rénqún.
You're right. I can try a brighter blue, which fits this campaign's target audience better.
L
对，就是这个意思。还有右下角的二维码，能不能放到更明显的位置？
Duì, jiùshì zhège yìsi. Hái yǒu yòuxiàjiǎo de èrwéimǎ, néng bù néng fàng dào gèng míngxiǎn de wèizhì?
Yes, exactly. Also, the QR code in the bottom-right corner—can it be placed in a more visible spot?
W
没问题，我把它移到中间偏下的位置，这样大家扫码的时候一眼就能看到。
Méi wèntí, wǒ bǎ tā yí dào zhōngjiān piānxià de wèizhì, zhèyàng dàjiā sǎomǎ de shíhou yìyǎn jiù néng kàndào.
No problem. I'll move it to a position slightly below center, so people can spot it at a glance when scanning.
L
太好了。对了，这次活动下个月就要上线了，你大概什么时候能改好？
Tài hǎo le. Duì le, zhè cì huódòng xià ge yuè jiù yào shàngxiàn le, nǐ dàgài shénme shíhou néng gǎihǎo?
Great. By the way, this campaign is launching next month. Roughly when can you finish the revisions?
W
如果没有别的大改动，我今天下午就能出一版新的给您看。
Rúguǒ méiyǒu bié de dà gǎidòng, wǒ jīntiān xiàwǔ jiù néng chū yì bǎn xīn de gěi nín kàn.
If there are no other big changes, I can produce a new version this afternoon for you to look at.
L
那太好了，改好以后直接发到我邮箱，我会尽快给你反馈。
Nà tài hǎo le, gǎihǎo yǐhòu zhíjiē fā dào wǒ yóuxiāng, wǒ huì jǐnkuài gěi nǐ fǎnkuì.
That's great. After you finish, send it straight to my email, and I'll give you feedback as soon as possible.
W
好的，那我先去改了，有问题随时找您。
Hǎo de, nà wǒ xiān qù gǎi le, yǒu wèntí suíshí zhǎo nín.
Okay, then I'll go make the changes now. If there are any issues, I'll come to you anytime.